Technical Communication 6e Usage Handbook

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When one term in a phrase is in the general category to which the other term belongs, it’s known as a redundant category. Typically, you can improve your writing by choosing the more specific term and eliminating the general category:

Eliminate categories that create redundancies.
inspection procedure promotion activity seven in number at this point in time
unstable nature red in color hot temperature rectangular in shape
small size rough in texture manufacturing process dull in appearance
reliability factor excessive degree    

 

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